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Danielle
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0 posted 2008-02-02 02:59 PM



You say you don't wan to leave me...
So don't
You ask me what I think you should do
When you already know the answer
You explain the pros
But seem to forget the cons
You ask if I would leave you
And you know I never could
No matter how far away from me you may be...
I will always be your's
You have to do what you think is right
And I will stand by the choice that you make
I just hope that whatever you choose keeps you here...
Safe, with me
But if that it not the case
I do understand

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2008-02-02 03:07 PM


I can feel your heart in this Danielle.  I hope all works for you.
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2 posted 2008-02-02 03:08 PM


Danielle,

Sometimes the choices are out of our hands.  You know this but I had to say it anyway.

My heart goes out to you and your boyfriend.  He is truly appreciated by so many - and the sacrifices made are great by our service members, their families and all loved ones.

You are appreciated in supporting him so he can do the job he has to do.

Please, keep us posted and pour your heart out in poetry to share with all of us.

I am thinking of you, Danielle.

Alison

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2008-02-02 03:18 PM


Danielle ~ Donna and Alison speak for me as well.

God bless,

Love, Light, Harmony & Peace,

EA

Here's a hug for you and your boyfriend.

Artic Wind
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4 posted 2008-02-02 03:19 PM


Yes, this war is long!

it should really stop, this is all just very wrong, but yes, they did destroy some of the untied states which is soooo not right!

but, war isn't the way to settle it, but in some peoples heads, it is!



ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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5 posted 2008-02-02 05:57 PM


May he be safe if he decides to go back. Broken hearts are the first consequence of all the insane wars that men insist fighting.

Your pain is felt.

love and peace
Margherita


JamesMichael
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6 posted 2008-02-02 07:39 PM


Nice writing of the emotions that are touched when a loved one goes away...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2008-02-03 02:36 AM


Danielle... I hope it all works out for you and your boyfriend... noone wins in any war.. lives lost at a cost... stay safe.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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