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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-04-02 06:04 PM


Valley of Consummated Lovers Blessed


As the sweet spring breeze blows
angels dust over the valley of
consummated lovers blessed
I tell my sweetheart three of
the reasons why I love her.

I love you because you approached
me and showed an interest in me,
before I said a word to you.

I love you because you accepted me
just as I was, wanting nothing more
from me than my smile and my presence.

I love you because you appreciate me,
as I share the love from my heart that
wants nothing more than to love you.


JamesLee
02April
2008










[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (04-03-2008 06:01 AM).]

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2008-04-02 06:32 PM


Ohh, dear James, indeed a blessed valley! I can see your sweetie blushing in joy for your telling of the reasons.

Sweet and lovely.

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2008-04-02 06:33 PM


three of the most beautiful reasons to love my sweet James... just delightful !   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
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Seoul S.Korea
3 posted 2008-04-02 06:35 PM


sweet and love blessed.
enjoyed the read.

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2008-04-02 07:12 PM


As the sweet spring breeze blows
angels dust over the valley of
consummated lovers blessed..."

Just lovely JamesMichael, A very enjoyed Read!



ARCTIC WIND

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
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Australia, Victoria
5 posted 2008-04-02 08:10 PM



You are quite a romantic James

And I loved your post.

Lindsay

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2008-04-03 06:03 AM


Thank you Margherita, Roniece, Seoulair, Artic and Lindsay for the wonderful responses...much appreciated...James
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