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Brian23
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since 2007-11-03
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Belfast, Ireland

0 posted 2008-03-30 01:53 PM




Can words be speckled upon the heart? Will flowers then grow and thrive?
Only actions can cause the fruitions of well placed intentions to survive
Inspiration from the heavens to the earth can create the noblest among the known
Yet fate when it has been determined, every sword it has bar none overthrown  

The princely colors of my coat of arms are as bright and blinding as can be
Let it be known I shall never surrender until I bite the dust while upon my knees
Men for all time past including me shall never say that we were not free
Let one more battle commence, faith in the free I decree.

Battle lines have been drawn and my delicate flowers are well guarded
This battle has despairingly started
Who will call out the victory cry?
Fate or I?

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Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea
1 posted 2008-03-30 06:11 PM


wonderful!!!thought provoking!!
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