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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-03-28 07:27 PM


     Spring Evening

With a brush of wind and chaos,
an exquisite new-season sunset
paints the dwindling daylight
  sky
in unexpected hues of fine
citron yellow and tangerine,
as darkling mountaintop, forest,
  and mere
ring with the gathering twilight
and a grand, wide star-mantle moon
  rising.
Nothing is more lonely…
more lovely… more true…
than such sweet wilderness!

     ---b. e. adams (3/28/08)


© Copyright 2008 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2008-03-28 07:29 PM


BEAUTIFUL! Your Nature 'paintings' are superb, Bruce!
BugBuggy
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michigan
2 posted 2008-03-28 07:46 PM


I close my eyes and can picture every piece of color you named and can see it all so clearly this was wonderful

BugBuggy

Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
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3 posted 2008-03-28 07:56 PM


I agree on above comment.
Indeed a very superb-poem of wonderful views.

You were the air, you embraced earth
You were the void, you embraced all.


Marchmadness
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4 posted 2008-03-28 09:25 PM


Painted with the colors of peace and tranquility, I see your words.
                       Ida

Thalen
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since 2007-12-15
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New Jersey, USA
5 posted 2008-03-28 09:28 PM


I enjoy your style of nature and philosophy. I hope you can look for my poem "Death of Your World" and see how I feel about nature. For I feel that we may very well share these ideals.
ArtSolstice
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6 posted 2008-03-28 11:34 PM


Ahhh, you've set out your Spring palette, I see, Poet. And what a word-palette it is!
This poem is as lovely as it is inspiring.


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