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Jeret03
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since 2008-03-26
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0 posted 2008-03-26 01:20 AM


Well I don't do this much.....but here we go

For my sins, this price I pay

A true love found, here for good
But all alone, at home you stood
Being taken for granted, day after day

You stayed by my side, heart full of love
I kept pushing you away, shove by shove
Angry, hurtful words I would often say

Then one time on a night so dear
An unforgivable sin would bring you to tears
From this night on, separate we lay

My shattered heart aches for a time long past
I will never love again, she was the last
She's never coming back, try I may

For my sins, this price I pay

© Copyright 2008 Jeret03 - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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1 posted 2008-03-26 08:38 AM


The things we do to each other.  

I enjoyed the read and hope to read more.

Welcome to Pip.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2008-03-26 09:32 AM


welcome to PIP!


Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2008-03-26 09:35 AM


Jeret03,

Nice first line.

Bobby

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2008-03-26 09:51 AM


Jeret,

Welcome to Passions. We learn alot from
looking back on past actions. Now we go forward
and hopefully, never to repeat them again.

Please, check your Email for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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5 posted 2008-03-26 01:43 PM


Welcome to PIP Jeret.
              Ida

Seoulair
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Seoul S.Korea
6 posted 2008-03-27 03:28 AM


oh, sad life.  
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2008-03-27 04:45 PM


I learned a few lessons from Mr. Consequence...you have control over your choices but you can't choose the consequences...and they might not be smiling when they come...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
8 posted 2008-03-28 12:06 PM


Welcome to our pages blue.. I enjoyed your first post with us...   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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