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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-03-20 08:33 PM

    Journey Into Spring

At the bright moon’s edge,
the whole world is turning
round these mountain tops,
and the pristine magnificence
of this clear-frosty eve,
could almost fool the winter
  into lingering
on his eternal journey into
  spring.

         ---b. e. adams (3/20/08)

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2008-03-20 09:08 PM

Well, that mr. winter had best keep moving along!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2008-03-22 06:20 AM

Fine writing...my girlfriend notified me that its snowing in Chicago...doesn't it know that its spring?...James

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

3 posted 2008-03-22 12:26 PM

Lovely poem, well written, and greatly enjoyed.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2008-03-22 12:34 PM

Lovely as always. It's definately spring here in So. Calif. and I like spring until it turns into a too hot summer.
Ida

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

5 posted 2008-03-27 04:59 AM

like a picture..it will be in my mind.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2008-03-27 10:31 AM

well done!

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

7 posted 2008-03-27 10:42 AM

Secondhanddreampoet,

This is true. Winter seems to be just plodding along into Spring.

Bobby

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

8 posted 2008-03-27 10:57 AM

Excellent writing; the imagery carries it along with ease. I live in Las Vegas, and pretty soon I'll be lamenting old El Sol's scorched earth policy over the mountains and rocky meadows!

Art

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2008-03-27 11:16 AM

Oh, I like the way this sounds in my ear...

Thank you, Sir!

BugBuggy
Member

since 2005-12-19

Posts 130
michigan

10 posted 2008-03-27 10:08 PM

loved it spring is on the edge of returning any day now I'm sure

BugBuggy

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

11 posted 2008-03-28 11:29 AM

enjoyed it

yann

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2008-03-28 06:18 PM

enjoyed

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