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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-03-20 07:06 PM


    Vernal Equinox

Beyond the last winter
  sunset
and the grasping reach
  of men,
in this furtive forest
where our wandering
twilight dreams
vanish into night…
time’s tumbleweed moon
begins to race the
  roaming wind
toward the far horizon,
as hosts of tiny, patient,
infinitely nebulous things…
await the morning star
and kiss of spring.

      ---b. e. adams (3/20/08)

© Copyright 2008 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2008-03-20 07:20 PM


And you bring such magic to these hours of waiting, dear Bruce.

As always a joy to read!

Love,
Margherita

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2 posted 2008-03-20 07:55 PM


My mind is captured by these images!
"time’s tumbleweed moon
begins to race the
  roaming wind"
and those
"tiny, patient,
infinitely nebulous things"
I picture fireflies, and want to feel a warm breeze.
SPRING!

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2008-03-20 08:35 PM


And what a moon to dance beneath too!

Blessed be, Mr. b.

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4 posted 2008-03-21 01:09 AM


Such a lovely tribute to spring as it dances in and winter as it begins to take its final bow.

A

effjayel
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5 posted 2008-03-21 06:56 AM


I'm watching & waiting for that star too Bruce, at least you are making the wait more bearable....Thanks
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