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Open Poetry #42

She Always Is

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-03-19 04:38 PM

She Always Is

"I remember when I told her
   that she was magnificent.
     Whether close or far apart,
         she always is.".........

I could cry
when I awake
in the middle
of the night
and realize
that for now
she is gone,
but my heart
prefers to think
of her return,
to remember
and not to yearn
those special moments
we spent as two,
and then I smile
and I don't feel
so all alone
without you.

JamesLee
19March
2008

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-03-19 05:53 PM

James,

I'd look this over, and see how many ladies you're talking about here.

Bobby

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2008-03-19 05:58 PM

A very nice poem, i like true love poems...

Thanks

yann

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2008-03-19 06:57 PM

enjoyed

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2008-03-19 07:14 PM

lovely James... just lovely! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2008-03-19 07:20 PM

Thank you Robert Jordon, 2islander2, vandan and Roniece for the wonderful responses...
Very funny Robert...actually in my life time I have given many women compliments, but only one, my girlfriend is magnficent.

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