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Open Poetry #42

Turning Naked

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2008-03-18 01:23 PM

The world doesn’t seem any closer
Seemingly father, distant, darker
With my thoughts followed around
The back of my room’s décor
The back of the heads that cry

The points of youth where
Naivety was where the mornings rode
With the high scale breaths
Of the pancakes wet chests,

With the mind still
Sitting to a world with reason,
With a joy that numbed me
But secured me, assured me
There was a peace among cemeteries,
A peace with the crows that hovered,

But as I sit, more manipulated,
The world more frozen, my hands creased older,
The peace now brides to shadows of suicides,
The graves seemingly grayer,
Where past generations of mass murders
Now stare louder, stare inside me,
Walk beside me, so now, I look outside me.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-03-18 02:24 PM

Tomer,

There is a lot of good thinking in this poem. Stay naked, there is nothing wrong with naked.

Bobby

starpower
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 82
Utah

2 posted 2008-03-18 05:58 PM

hey tomer,
that was a nice poem

You can send me an email,
Thanks

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2008-03-19 05:09 PM

Thanks for the read guys, take care.

Tomer

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