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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
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0 posted 2008-03-14 03:10 PM



Cobwebs stream across my inkwell of words.
Disintegrating thoughts twist upon the
Cobweb...
Trapped...
Unable to release the declaration
of
love, hate, and of hidden truths.
The restoration of my mind...
crushed...
like the fragile fragments
of
the delicate
Cobweb.
Time in all her beauty
will once again reach out to my fingertips-
and
The Cobweb will no longer have me in her grasp.
But till that moment does arrive-
Cobwebs stream across my inkwell of words.

Hugs
BonBon

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2008-03-14 05:08 PM


even with cobwebs, this was enjoyable Bonnie. Good to see you again


M

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2008-03-15 10:12 AM


profound writing there missy....
sure have missed reading you
certainly a beauty to behold

thank you for sharing...

Seoulair
Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea
3 posted 2008-03-28 03:14 PM


Enjoyed. A very beautiful one.
vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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4 posted 2008-03-28 06:12 PM


enjoyed
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
5 posted 2008-03-28 07:28 PM


Dear Bon-Bon,

This is difficult to read with the red font.

Bobby

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