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xTr3m3sT
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0 posted 2008-03-07 07:13 AM


You are beauty in its richest form.
You are like a goddess waiting to fly.
An angel with wings hovering in the sky.
Looking down at me with your amazing blue eyes.

Your laughter is like a symphony in my head.
A smile that awakes my soul from darkness.
A touch of perfection with a hint of glamor.
A smell of freshly picked roses.

I will give you the world and beyond.
For as long as these words are kept.
Your beauty will stay with me and you.
Until we both disappear into the sunset.

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2008-03-07 12:07 PM


x_T ~

So, beautiful. So very, very beautiful. Your adoring words of love and appreciation must have dearly touched the heart of your "Blue Eyed Goddess".

Loving hug to each of you,

Earth Angel

ILoveTheRain
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2 posted 2008-03-07 12:11 PM


Your words are so beautiful. We do have similaritry, but mine seem to be less happy. The one I just recently posted speaks for itself.
LadyTom
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3 posted 2008-03-07 12:25 PM


Beautiful poem on romance. Enjoyed.
xTr3m3sT
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4 posted 2008-03-07 01:51 PM


Thanks for your comments. Today I took her out for subway then we walked around for 2 hours and we talked then I walked her home... I truly love her dearly.
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2008-03-07 03:55 PM


Wonderful...James
xTr3m3sT
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6 posted 2008-03-07 04:10 PM


ty =D
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