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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2008-03-05 10:48 PM



Spontaneity of Thought

Once a karmic whistle
Sweet, upon the night sky
Guided into color schemes of violet dreams
Wisteria takes seasons by white storm
Shimmering the newly wetted ground beg crack
Petals form of peaceful days and rainstorm glaze
Formerly to dazzle just a hint that yellow plays
Morning vespers murmur to the sun
Carry on to afternoon, a warming trend be won
And wonder, as the fizz of Popsicle pinks
Once a karmic whistle
Sweet, upon the night sky

Copyright Kkh 3/5/08

© Copyright 2008 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
LadyTom
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1 posted 2008-03-05 11:31 PM


Beautiful truly.
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2008-03-06 07:46 AM


a scene fit for a queen!

beautiful!

jwesley
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3 posted 2008-03-06 07:58 AM


I especially liked the popsicle part...me and my grand daughter, Ryleigh, are both crazy about popsicles...especially bananna flavored.

Enjoyed, my friend.

jimmy

KeyLimeSorbet
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4 posted 2008-03-06 08:19 AM


very enjoyed :-)
sewasham
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5 posted 2008-03-13 10:37 PM


Lovely words from a lovely person. Take care and Have fun. Steve


Marchmadness
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6 posted 2008-03-13 11:26 PM


Very pretty, Diamond.
                Ida

Artic Wind
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7 posted 2008-03-13 11:52 PM


Beautifully Written!

ARCTIC WIND

effjayel
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8 posted 2008-03-14 05:23 AM


Very cute !
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