Open Poetry #41 |
dark st. ranger (episode 11) |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you read my eyes early and said there were demons that made your foot wiggle and your skin wear shivers but you played the music and took possession in the line to be the last dance percussion slow belly skinned to my anger and now you read the mouths of the whispering kind that speak of the trail ways of my tattoos on their memories your second thoughts are lovely but out of order in timing afterthoughts always are it seems when our purse if full of excuses did you expect to find summer under the walls of winter a virgin satyr perhaps untouched by even your dreams when the proper shops her spend at the haven of gypsies does she devise their kind to provide her with golden when all they own is the wind? ______________ daark |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"you read my eyes early and said there were demons that made your foot wiggle and your skin wear shivers" liked this lots and lots |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I keep reading this but you played the music and took possession in the line to be the last dance percussion slow belly skinned to my anger ... it's a mesmerizing poem for my eyes. A |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Yet another Masterpiece, Great Job !!!!!! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
afterthoughts always are it seems when our purse if full of excuses and all they own is the wind yea this one bites........ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you ladies for the read and comments...you bless me |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"did you expect to find summer under the walls of winter a virgin satyr perhaps untouched by even your dreams" stranger darlin' this is splendid |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone thank ya, thank ya very much.. |
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