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Open Poetry #41

The Rebuilding Of Trust

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2007-08-30 02:56 PM

The Rebuilding Of Trust

Wanting to regain trust
Some will find hard to do
Still it can be achieved
If you talk things through

Problems from the past
Are ones to leave behind
Communicate together
Say whats on your mind

Trust each other equally
Let it become part of you
Bring thoughts to light
By sharing an open view

In the rebuilding of trust
Find time to clear the air
Forgiveness is the key
To agree upon and share

Hope ©2007

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

1 posted 2007-08-30 05:17 PM

Good advice here, Hope!

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

2 posted 2007-08-31 11:24 AM

i think thats best advice ive heard in a long time, and creative to make it into a poem

I am the little cracked mirror

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-08-31 05:26 PM

Like the message and the smooth flow...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2007-08-31 06:34 PM

Dear Hope,
this is wise and beautiful. A perfect recipe to heal a relationship.

Love,
Margherita

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

5 posted 2007-08-31 08:09 PM

I agree...it's wise and beautifully expressed

"Communicate together
Say whats on your mind"
This is the difficult part to apply..

Thank you

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

6 posted 2007-09-01 03:22 AM

yes, a very nice piece.
enjoyed the read!!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2007-09-03 04:51 AM

"In the rebuilding of trust
Find time to clear the air
Forgiveness is the key
To agree upon and share "

Definite truth.
Nice write.
JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

8 posted 2007-09-03 10:07 PM

Yes, indeed it is. Once trust is destroyed, it is so hard to regain it again.

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