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PoloniusFicklebottom
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since 2007-06-27
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0 posted 2007-08-30 01:19 PM


Will you marry me?
baby, will you marry me?
The time is right, I'm asking tonight,
if you would share your life with mine.
-So, will you marry me?
baby, will you marry me?
I'm down on one knee, with this ring you see,
this one question needs your answer so please...

For you, my sweet lady,
I would gladly get down on one knee.

If I hear a "no" from you,
then be sure I will get down on two.

So please, don't deny what I feel,
I'm out of knees on which to kneel.

I only ask that you grant me,
this wish to be King for a Queen.

Will you marry me?
baby, will you marry me?
The time is right, I'm asking tonight,
as the love of my life,
baby,
would you be my wife?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mZ7amBkTDNM
^will
you marry me?^


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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
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My own little Icey Oblivion
1 posted 2007-08-31 11:28 AM


if not have her read that she should change her mind fast afterwards

I am the little cracked mirror

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2007-08-31 12:56 PM


Oh, Polonius, methinks thy bottom be not so fickle!

"I only ask that you grant me,
this wish to be King for a Queen."

~ If I be she, so mote it be! lol


EA

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-08-31 04:11 PM


Fear not...as time goes by she will bring up the subject if she so desires...James
ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
Posts 342
Florida USA
4 posted 2007-08-31 04:45 PM


Really enjoyed this poem, thank you for sharing
sweetbomb
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since 2007-08-07
Posts 48
Canada
5 posted 2007-08-31 08:17 PM


How old are you and how old is she? How long have you been together, do you live together? Do you mind if she has a life of her own? Does she mind if you have one of your own? Are you thinking or is it lust? Do you like her? Do you think you will like her when she is 45? Will she like you when you are 45? D
PoloniusFicklebottom
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since 2007-06-27
Posts 17

6 posted 2007-08-31 09:23 PM


haha, thank you all for the concern and pointers.
it's just a poem, there is no proposal.
-although i do hope to experience the wonders of marraige someday!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mZ7amBkTDNM  will you marry me?^


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