I Find Her in a Dream (Triolet)

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MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02

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Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2007-08-30 07:35 AM

"I Find Her in a Dream"
(Triolet)

I close my eyes and find her in a dream
to dance beneath the shadows of moonlight.
No kinder, gentle spirit have I seen.
I close my eyes and find her in a dream.

I go to see her often there it seems
for when I'm with her everything is right.
I close my eyes and find her in a dream
to dance beneath the shadows of moonlight.

MoonShadow
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[This message has been edited by MoonShadow (09-01-2007 01:50 PM).]

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

1 posted 2007-08-30 11:01 AM

A kind of dream that every heart might wish for!
Very beautiful and also ethereal.

Love,
Margherita

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2007-08-30 11:15 AM

Ahh this is the stuff that dreams are made of....I am such a big dreamer and believe in the power of dreams. This is rather lovely Sir.

after a fall I get back up,
move on 'cause the past is the past and theres no tomorrow if remaining in still waters while the river flows on ~dsmith

MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

3 posted 2007-08-31 12:24 PM

Margherita... Thank you for your kind response.

Donna... in truth a dream is a wish your heart makes. Thank you for your response.

MoonShadow
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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2007-08-31 09:33 AM

Shall I have this dance?

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (08-31-2007 10:30 AM).]

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2007-08-31 10:25 AM

roses to the moon....

MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

6 posted 2007-09-01 09:11 AM

Milly... Thank you for the lovely graphics.
One day I will have to learn how to do that too.

MoonShadow
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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2007-09-01 10:40 AM

May you manifest your dreams into reality, Dear Poet!

I see that you continue to be in fine poetic form!

Warm hug ~ big smile,

Linda

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

8 posted 2007-09-01 10:43 AM

MS, methinks there be a typo on line one. I wouldn't want anything to mar this lovely triolet!

~ oh, and now I can SAVE this gem, since I forgot to in my previous reply!

Hugs,
Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-01-2007 12:27 PM).]

MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

9 posted 2007-09-01 01:52 PM

Linda... thank you for your keen eye (typo fixed)
    and your sweet angelic reply.
        The form is yet with me and moves me.
     Your kind words are most appreciated.

           MoonShadow
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ethome
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since 2000-05-14

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New Brunswick Canada

10 posted 2007-09-01 08:26 PM

Very pretty and romantic.

Eric

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

11 posted 2007-09-03 04:45 PM

gentle Sir MoonShadow
surely the lady finds you in a dream
and rests her hand gently on your shoulder
in a dance of love

sigh...

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
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12 posted 2007-09-03 05:18 PM

Hello MoonShadow.....I was just thinking of the way your name has no space between moon and shadow; that is how man and dream are attached in this poem. Very lovely to read.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

13 posted 2007-09-03 05:25 PM

nice read

MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

14 posted 2007-09-04 12:18 PM

Eric, thank you for the read and your kind reply.

MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

15 posted 2007-09-04 12:23 PM

Milady Kate... A Lady such as you
              would surely know such things, Yes?
              Thank you for your sweet response.

             MoonShadow
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MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

16 posted 2007-09-04 12:26 PM

Martie... Love your logic.
Thank you for your response.

Vandana... Thank you for the read. Glad you enjoyed.

MoonShadow
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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

17 posted 2007-09-05 05:06 AM

Nice...James

MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

18 posted 2007-09-06 11:50 AM

James... Thank you ever so kindly for the read.

MoonShadow
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