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vandana
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0 posted 2007-08-29 06:33 PM



Come to me,
my love,
I will love you,
No matter what?
Let us breathe once again,
here comes the rain,
Where the love lies upon
our heart,
Come to me,
My love,
Life takes you far away,
to the dreams you see,
To the love we make,
Daily,
where we pray,
Where ray of sunshines show,
at the sky,
Come to me,
My love,
Don't shy away,
From me,
Don't be afraid,
To fall in love with me,
Come to me,
Come to me,
My love,
Come to my life,
This is my life,
Come to me,
My love

© Copyright 2007 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2007-08-29 06:36 PM


A very beautiful invitation, dear vandana!

There is a nice musical rhythm in this.

Love,
Margherita

Tim
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2 posted 2007-08-29 09:49 PM


very nice, enjoyed
Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2007-08-30 06:39 AM


ms van, you dance as a woman here..enjoyed it
Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2007-08-30 09:53 AM


Vandana, this is Beautiful!
ladylisa
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5 posted 2007-08-30 10:14 AM


Very moving!    
Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2007-08-30 02:40 PM


Very very nicely done, Vandana.
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2007-08-30 04:41 PM


Wonderful...James
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