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alicegirl777 New Member
since 2007-08-27
Posts 2 |
this is about bush.... the last tear has fallen and im sick of you the bitter cold has hit me for the last time the blood the eraser of the cold hard truth if you want something do it yourself you came here acting like a fool you have warmed your self with your ego and made others cold you have neglected the neglglected made the rich richer discriminated the different what happened to God's country |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. war is a young Marine with his guts all over a wall because of a grenade. perhaps you need another title . . . PS Marines are volunteers, and they know what they’re getting into; if they don't the Corps tells them, very clearly. USMC 69-73 . |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...war is what it is...James |
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