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lowtechman
New Member

since 2007-08-17

Posts 2
NJ

0 posted 2007-08-24 10:30 PM

                        Among the ruins
                     were pieces of my heart
                     scattered about the dunes
                     each precious part
                     My soul was laid to waste
                     admist the desert sands
                     and fragments strewn
                     across many lands
                     my essence gone
                     my spirit stripped
                     I was so sure
                     how could I have slipped ?
                     Yet I err I did
                     I did choose wrong
                     in giving away my love
                     how will I get along ?

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2007-08-24 10:40 PM

welcome to the fine blue pages of 'P.I.P.-land'!

nice post!

great choice of 'P.I.P.' UserName (ID)!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2007-08-24 11:28 PM

i liked your beach metaphors throughout this piece..you are from NJ, very nice..there are lovely beaches to fill many a man's daydreams there
welcome to the blue

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2007-08-25 09:43 AM

I was wondering when I would see your first post here. Very nicely done and as Mish said, the beach referances tied in very nicely to this. Well done!! Welcome to Pip!!
Please check your email for a special greeting

after a fall I get back up,
move on 'cause the past is the past and theres no tomorrow if remaining in still waters while the river flows on ~dsmith

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2007-08-25 10:20 AM

Frank~
WELCOME to this PiP circle of poets and friends~

If you want your homepage to show up ...
go to the top of the screen ... click Members AREA ... then change the link for your homepage to
http://www.lowtechman.com/

It's gotta have that http:// thingie in it to allow access to the page~

I visited your homepage and I think others would enjoy seeing (and hearing) you too~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2007-08-25 11:18 AM

Greetings, ltc! Welcome to what may very well become your new home-away-from-home, as it has for so many of our fellow kindred poetic spirits!

Our love may fall on desert sands, but it is never wasted. You really engaged my emotions with this fine, debuting poem of yours.

Giving you a warm, welcoming hug,
Earth Angel

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2007-08-25 11:45 AM

welcome to the passion

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2007-08-25 04:08 PM

Way to go 'TechMan'~
I see you got your 'house' in order~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2007-08-25 04:17 PM

We don't do wrong in giving away our love, as love is something to give, we do wrong by giving it to the wrong person...and the way to know is to go slow...James

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2007-08-27 02:27 PM

A wonderful first offering! I look forward to more from your pen.

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