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Light and Eyes
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Light and Eyes |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197
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Note: "light and eyes" was a common endearment in Roman love poetry, lux et oculi. You are my light and eyes. I see myself young and new with eyes of a lover polishing me shiny, filling the cracks, mending the rips, healing my aches. I stand under a new sun, washed in fresh light. Reforged under your gentle hammers. Tempered like new steel, hot from the furnace alive in a shower of sparks and white fire, refitted and ready to go. [This message has been edited by Bronzeage (08-23-2007 10:25 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Romantic. MoonShadow . |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 another lovely. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting! applause!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I couldn't help but notice there was some hammering goin' on....  This reminded me of a bit, of The Wizard of Oz--the preparations before their presentation to him... Interesting!  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
smoldering !!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am enjoying your poetry so very much, sir. Nicely done! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BronzeAge~ I like a well-sculpted piece ... this is that~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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