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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-08-21 08:10 PM


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Under the hem
Of a long red coat—
Her brown leather shoes


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aziza
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1 posted 2007-08-21 09:56 PM


You paint October with beautiful brush strokes.
I am enjoying each picture.

Alison

TomMark
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2 posted 2007-08-22 01:06 AM


Above the rim
of curly white hairs
His gold crown with jewels

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