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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-08-21 06:37 AM


jimmy-joy's auto forest
and limousine rental agency
with pick-a-part chevys
and fords growing on trees

I just come here for the chair
that leans back and makes crickets
on the greasy hardwood legs
and the calendars on the walls

of some preacher's daughters
being flexible with morals
in return for tuition they say
to the school of hard knocks

and the coffee in a sock
dipped every morning at 9
in the blue mouth belly pot
on a oil burning stove

made from fenders and heads
from a buick after she was regal
in her day but is just metal now
that jimmy found under tow

with her rear end all used up


___________

daark

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bel1e
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since 2006-07-24
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1 posted 2007-08-21 07:00 AM


lol~~

always a trip through the wrinkled blue psyche of your thoughts~~

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Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2007-08-21 07:41 AM


always somewhat amazed at how you paint the picture sir... the word useage and the slightly off centered view of the mundane and ordinary give it life...

truly enjoy... your art

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

3 posted 2007-08-21 08:48 AM


I smell grease. Just don't get me started...
Your fingers are great interpretors
for your eyes, always.

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
4 posted 2007-08-21 08:54 AM


Ah...Mr. D...always a blind ride when I get in with you...

I love the thrill of it.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
5 posted 2007-08-21 04:23 PM


D

I love this - you transport me to this place in your mind.  Good writing - you sweep me up in images & words.

A

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
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LA,CA
6 posted 2007-08-21 04:41 PM


interesting!

nice read!

Tomtoo

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
7 posted 2007-08-21 04:56 PM


would you like lube
with your fries sir?

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2007-08-22 06:20 AM


Cpat, Bel1e, Az, Susan C, Tom and inky..thanks to each of you for the read here..junk yards are cool sometimes even the ones in brentwood...
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