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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2007-08-20 03:27 PM


"I could be a star, you know?"
she said this as she licked the glue
on the edge of cigarette
talking to herself.

Then she squeezed a form to shape
twist and licked it, artfully.
"I could be a star..." She paused.

"If only I could hear applause."


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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2007-08-20 03:29 PM




Yes!

Exactly...

Thank you Karen.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2007-08-20 03:36 PM


Feel the love, you!

I'm gonna go flit about now.

I love you, muchly.

TomMark
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3 posted 2007-08-20 03:41 PM


very good, very good!!!!

love the read.

Tomtoo

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Gaia
4 posted 2007-08-20 08:17 PM


there you go, will you accept two "one-hands"

sisters are wonderful

LeeJ
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5 posted 2007-08-20 08:31 PM




greatness, knows greatness...

LOL, you guys are fantastic...

hugs

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6 posted 2007-08-21 07:44 AM


nicely done ma'am... indeed...


vandana
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7 posted 2007-08-21 11:11 AM


good read
serenity blaze
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8 posted 2007-08-21 03:26 PM


Thanks folks. (It's an old one I pulled out of sanctuary, and dusted off for the lovely Susan C.)

I appreciate the "applause". Ya'll are great.

Love to all (especially my sistahs!)


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