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bel1e
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0 posted 2007-08-20 01:22 PM


I’ve walked November,
end to end, barefoot
over its thresholds
of stone, of surrender,
so descends a black autumn,
a thousand leaves dying,
so much dying,
the soul, a flask
of dried salts
trickling through the eye sockets
of a clay mask, bristling glass
branches in a garden of blood roses,
just out of reach and relinquished
to a backdrop of Japanese Maples
draped in the fevers of morning,

always mine, darkening
the long shadows of the day’s delirium,
nothing but a drum skin jaguar of absence
beats through the flesh,
like a bell’s toll, yet
yours is the sound that breaks
open my body, dressed
in its slender wings
and barbed kisses,
with bells in their depths,
the silence of bare limbs
and the long wings in chorus
with the silk of rain falling softly,
as night melts one body
into another,

listen, listen
as I enter
your thoughts, too far
for a sound to cross the river
as the silver earth darkens,
over Bethlehem, beaded
with the sugars of the body,
soft as dream, the night’s
black harvest of moments
span the passageways
where panthers guard our oblivion
in some gray dominion of summer
and soon, come over the soul,

the clock face, a cadence
carved in the glyphs of a river,
always, always out of reach,
like the chalice I lift
to sun burnt lips, full of ashes,
and everywhere
the colors I cannot take
my eyes from,
all of them, red
with bells in their depths,

a black-veined butterfly’s
struggle to ascend its bruises
through a bloodbath of salts,
soft, upon your tongue
the taste of sand
and evening
becoming body.

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2007-08-20 01:26 PM


intricately woven...always layers and layers to be read and thought about...

it is always a pleasure to read you kid...

always an education..... and an insight...


bel1e
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2 posted 2007-08-20 01:28 PM


thanx Chief~

this one, I think...is one of my Dear Diary ...confessional tapestries...I recently found the pic...and thought it might go well with the poem

thanx love~

~smooches

  

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3 posted 2007-08-20 01:49 PM


dear diary....

it must indeed be quite the diary to read Belle...  

bel1e
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4 posted 2007-08-20 01:57 PM




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endless drivel...lol
but thanks for saying that, Chief~

  

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-08-20 04:46 PM


A pleasure...James
bel1e
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6 posted 2007-08-20 07:06 PM


thanx so much, James~

  

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2007-11-04 07:02 PM


To the top in November...James
Earth Angel
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8 posted 2007-11-04 07:10 PM


You are in a league all your own, Goddessa Poetessa!


EA

Artic Wind
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9 posted 2007-11-04 07:33 PM


very powerful words WOW
that is a very goooooooooood poem, i meant it,

i am shaking it was so good, going in for another peek ! lol

ARCTIC WIND

1slick_lady
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10 posted 2007-11-04 07:49 PM


your poetry is such a delight to read
you are tender and soft and sharp as a razor
I have missed your poetry I was going to write you and tell you to post
something but it is private so…
you are so talented and i enjoy you
you have become one of my favorite poetesses
very happy to see you here today

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