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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-08-20 05:40 AM


Mister Half Moon

Mister half moon
I see you hanging
there in the sky
looking like the
left over half of
an apple pie.
Reminding me
blazonly that
my other half is
far, far away.
Oh my goodness
how I missed
her today.

Thanks a lot
Mister half moon
for reminding me
that she is no
where in sight.
Now I'll probably
miss her twice
as much tonite.
Mister half moon
don't hurt me,
help me make
it through
the night.

JamesLee
20August
2007







© Copyright 2007 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
sweetbomb
Junior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 48
Canada
1 posted 2007-08-20 05:50 AM


Awwwwwwwww you need some loving. Don't we all. Sad. D
TomMark
Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133
LA,CA
2 posted 2007-08-20 10:30 AM


sad romance. beautiful pome

enjoyed the read.

Tomtoo

MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02
Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.
3 posted 2007-08-20 01:06 PM



   Nice Write.

           MoonShadow
.

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