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A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2007-07-17 07:13 AM

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My pen is bleeding on the paper,
As love is bleeding in my heart.
Each word's the bare truth -
Put these words to music,
Play this music on the strings of my soul,
If you don't tear them, I'm yours.

If you see me dying,
Will you hold my hand through this hell?
Will you save me like you did once?
You know where to find the way
To the temple of my hope.
And I don't know...

If only I had died tomorrow,
Would you've turned back time,
So that tomorrow'd never come?
And if I asked you
To kill me with your bare hands,
Just not with your indifference... would you?

I can't breathe the air of fear.
I'm suffocating... will you hold me in your arms
To chase the fear away?
Will you breathe life into me?
Will you forgive me the weakness of one day
If I'm your shield for all the lifetime?

If I could live an hour of your life,
Dwell in your inner world that's just your own,
I'd turn to real your most precious dreams.
And if you realize
I love you with each ounce of my heart,
Will you ever say goodbye?

[This message has been edited by A Beautiful Disaster (07-18-2007 10:42 AM).]

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-07-17 10:11 AM

very sad!

A Beautiful Disaster
Member

since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

2 posted 2007-07-18 10:43 AM

I know... it's just the way I feel.

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

3 posted 2007-07-20 03:40 AM

....boom that poem hit me in the face full force ! You are very goodn and nice geo page poems what goes on , wow you seem to write alot, i should be taking notes lol
~J

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv

blue face
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 92

4 posted 2007-07-23 02:29 PM

wow nice poem
very sad All the same I enjoyed reading it
hope to read more.

sarah

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-07-23 02:43 PM

Sadly we can not make anothers choices, even when every desire of our heart is destroyed...James

A Beautiful Disaster
Member

since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

6 posted 2007-07-25 09:49 AM

Thanks a lot to everyone who replied!
However, everything is not so bad.
There is some hope in this piece, too.

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