Open Poetry #41 |
Questionnaire |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
What question shall I ask you, For finding the inner you, What small bits of talk will give me that view? What movements are there to see That will help enlighten me, What walk, sway, or pausing pose will it be? Pardon me now as I stare The true you I wish to share, Help me please with this modest questionnaire Gloom |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I love the concept and the poem. Nicely done Proff. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sometimes actions lead the way~~ nicely done M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
* chuckling* I am at time easily amused... and the amusement here is in the title not the poem... the poem is actually interesting... perhaps I should monitor my own replies to some pieces as they might seem I was oblivious to the poetry and treated what I read only as an opportunity to voice my opinon... enjoyed the humor sir.... and the poem. |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Heh, this is great Gloom. Good job. "Well I wish that you would cheat with someone, 'cause you're like diggin' holes in water and we know that can't be done." |
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Roysie Member
since 2007-08-05
Posts 102Canada |
We somehow got off on the wrong foot Professor. I'd like to start again if you would forgive my previous arrogant comments. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I really enjoyed the concept of this poem. Nicely done. Krysti ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Gentle Spirit, Pleased my words pleased you. Thank you, M I do tend to judge by what one does Thanks for taking the time to respond Thank you, Cpat Hair, I am Glad you could enjoy these humble words. Thank you, Edward Grim, Your praise honors me Thank you, hunnie_girl, I must say the concept came to me from outside But the words are mine Gloom |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Yup, I like it. Provokes much thought, emotions and images. Nice one Prof. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Ask me about the things I wear, not on my skin or in my hair. But those I wear upon my soul and form the essence of my whole. These questions tell you who I am but listen not with ears of man. But wear my answers on your soul if sharing truly is your goal. ~~~~ However it may be easier to get the answer sheet off somebody else! |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, LarryC, I do like to provoke Pleased you enjoyed Thank you, ivordavies, So few here give a poetic response anymore I am honored Gloom |
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