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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-08-14 07:25 AM


Precious Sweethearts

Lets say that I loved a woman.
And I assure you that I do.
Lets say that the above mentioned woman
also loved me too.

Lets say I lived in Honolulu
and that was where I needed to be.
Lets say that she lived in Chicago
incredibly far away from me.

Lets say for a season
we were together
until circumstances
changed our world.

Lets say that even though
for now we're far apart
we're still connected like
a luscious string of pearls.

Some have said that
time and distance
have driven precious
sweethearts like us apart.

In this case
I hope it never happens.
I love her with all
the love within my heart.

JamesLee
14August
2007



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2007-08-14 10:04 AM


JamesMichael~
Let's just say THIS IS FABULoUS~

Now ... you guys batten down the hatches as that danged Hurrican FLOSSIE heads your way~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
2 posted 2007-08-14 11:11 AM



   James... Let's say love transcends time and distance when soulmates look up and gaze from where they are and see the same stars. Thanks for sharing a lovely write.

            MoonShadow
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JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-08-14 05:12 PM


Thank you Marge and Moon Shadows for the wonderful responses...
Still not sure if the Hurricane will be downgraded to a Tropical Storm, mainly hitting the Big Island and passing south of Oahu where I'm at.  Hopefully it will be no more than a tropical storm, with high winds, lots of rain and high surf, and having experienced a tropical storm in Guam, they can be problematic, but preferable to a Hurricane...James

LeeJ
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4 posted 2007-08-14 06:32 PM


your poem sails sweet lines...all perfect and dreamy, and I hope for the both of you, your encounters are mystic and continual...


JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-08-15 04:19 PM


Me too Lee, me too...James
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