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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2007-08-13 05:55 AM

Her voice does not come
as often now,
   as it did back then.
What once was heard
loud and clear
is now heard as
distant whispers
on the wind.

         She will not be silenced.

The images have faded to dim,
no longer are they sharp
in my minds eye view.
Her curves and colors
have all changed
with the progression
of time,
and I wonder,
perchance
would she still know me?

           She is, unforgettable.

The way she wore her tranquility
made me feel safe, secure
   and comfortable
    like a blanket of warmth
       on a cold winters night.

I marveled at her beauty
  was in awe of her power,
              and grateful
that she would welcome me home
faithfully, every day.

           I drifted with time,
                  and in time, moved on.
Sometimes,
when the sun warms the day
and falls upon this pale of skin
I can feel her spirit fill me

                  I hear her in the breeze....

the mountain is calling me home.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2007-08-13 08:22 AM

lovely writing Donna...very soothing

M

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-08-13 04:35 PM

Wonderful...James

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

3 posted 2007-08-13 07:58 PM

Gentle Spirit, this was so very much enjoyed, peaceful bringings and heart filling contentment.

Rick

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2007-08-13 10:26 PM

she will always know you
because you are both
one and the same
with out a line of separation
lovely visions here

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2007-08-14 09:49 AM

Superb ending.
A lovely mystical feeling to this one.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2007-08-14 11:00 AM

good read

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2007-08-14 04:51 PM

ah~ now this speaks to things in me..the way we are called by what seems inanimate..the way we feel the comfort of place..

well done ma'am... indeed

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