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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-08-10 06:37 AM



the barking of dogwood on my eave
and another night's afternoon
eveless but sinful snaking
in and out of evangelical
and hell oh, or maybe el monte

I played the sad eye machines
with both hands for hours
but closing times are all the same
with shirt tails out
and tennis shoe print polish

on the best pair of justin's
ever resoled and shined naked new
by the juan or number two boy
on the corner of jesus street
by the chevy shop bondo and primer

now the dawning of pregnant weekends
transfusion of confusion in leather
and my bones will hold up another body
through the process of e-lumination
where the last tree standing loses

to the teepee's urge to make splinters

__________

daark

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bel1e
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1 posted 2007-08-10 07:09 AM


~loving your intricacies, daark~

  

Sunshine
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2 posted 2007-08-10 11:50 AM


now the dawning of pregnant weekends
transfusion of confusion in leather
and my bones will hold up another body
through the process of e-lumination
where the last tree standing loses

to the teepee's urge to make splinters

~*~

So many images...you lean into one's imagination very well...


Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2007-08-10 04:45 PM


Bel1e thanks babe

________

ms sun, thanks for the touch lady friend

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2007-08-10 07:48 PM


"I played the sad eye machines
with both hands for hours
but closing times are all the same
with shirt tails out
and tennis shoe print polish"

I would have loved to have watched you~~


M

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2007-08-11 07:11 AM


ms MMs, such a naughty voyeur you are sometimes, I think I like it.  thanks babe
serenity blaze
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6 posted 2007-08-11 10:41 PM


It's Saturday night, and I almost missed my old place--the last stool, next to the wall...

but this?

"I played the sad eye machines
with both hands for hours
but closing times are all the same
with shirt tails out
and tennis shoe print polish"

made me remember what I'd nearly forgotten!

You are very, very good yanno...



You made me glad that I stayed home.


Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2007-08-12 07:44 AM


am glad you stayed home too serene one, we might have got in trouble if you had showed up
thanks for the grin in..

aziza
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8 posted 2007-08-12 06:39 PM


Sometimes I feel like I am in this web of words - hanging in a delicate balance as I am caught up in what you share.

Yep, and I like that sometimes.

A

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9 posted 2007-08-12 06:53 PM


on any given day when I read you, I am left with a smile.  Nice'un D.  
Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2007-08-13 06:28 AM


ms az, it is a pleasure to wrap you
in images and let you model them
thank you for touching.

_______________

ms gs, thanks donna friend for the sip in

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