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mdwhite
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0 posted 2007-08-05 06:24 AM


I was the age of 5, just a little boy
When my little sister had over a friend, and her name was Joy;
I remember they played barbie’s for just a little while;
And I of course was Super Man with my cape of towel;
After a while of bugging them they finally let me play;
I became the astronaut, all the rest of the day;
I flew out in my space ship to save the planet of two;
No matter how many enemies, because victory I knew;
With my space ship and I, not one did I miss;
Why, because every time I returned home,
I got a heroes kiss.

Martin D. White
Author - Living the Simple Life www.livingthesimlelife.com
Publisher www.poeticmonthly.com

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Kethry
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1 posted 2007-08-05 06:29 AM


It's always good to get a kiss as a reward, whether you are five or fifty.

a good commitee can decimate communication.

aziza
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2 posted 2007-08-05 03:45 PM


This is simply sweet - and I love simply sweet.  I hope you still save the world for a kiss.  

Thank you
Alison

DennisTheMenace
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3 posted 2007-08-05 03:50 PM


do tell more, a return in years to come with joy?  Enjoyed it Supernaut

mdwhite
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4 posted 2007-08-06 05:02 AM


Thank you for the nice responses.  This poem is part of my poetry book due out in a couple months.  More of my poetry can be read at www.livingthesimplelife.com/poetry.htm

Martin D. White
Author
Living The Simple Life www.livingthesimplelife.com  www.poetstage.com
Publisher- Poetic Monthly www.poeticmonthly.com

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5 posted 2007-08-06 01:50 PM


very cute poem...
Krysti

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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