Open Poetry #41 |
The Love Composition |
Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
The Love Composition Invigorating. Pretty, breathtaking Goddess. My every heartbeat. - Inspirational. Your ostensible beauty. You keep me writing. - Predomination. You have captured all my love. And enslaved my mind. - Multimillionaire. You bought my heart and my soul. You just took over. - Compositional. These haiku's have one message. Tell you I love you. [This message has been edited by Mr. Omniscient (07-14-2007 05:22 PM).] |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
This is very touching. As if you are writing to your muse. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful. enjoyed |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
a beautiful expression....and I loved the ending, how each lead to those three words... ~~**~~ |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I like this THe poem flowed so well that I didn't realize they were haiku Very nice. A |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Letters in red are always passionate, even more powerful when expressed to the one you love. By the way, I like your PIP name! Loved your poem, or your composition of many "little" poems each a piece of your heart, connected together in the end, with the last piece, "I Love You" J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.” |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
A wonderful composition on the most wonderful gift of all: Love "Ah! my Be-loved, fill the Cup that clears |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Clever, and charming... Write on! |
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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
Thank you very much. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"A Love Composition" ~ indeed!!! It's brimming with your show of love and adore! Keep on loving! ~ and writing! EA |
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