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Into your Deep
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Into your Deep |
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BBGrrl Member
since 2007-07-17
Posts 181BC, Canada 
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Midnight ocean, you seduce me - stars twinklewink from your brow. Soft silica, sensual with remembered heat invites my cautious feet to your lips. Sly tongue lapping at my toes, gently laughing, bubbling as you draw away. Bathe me with your kisses, ohhh. I hear your roar in a raging wave – afraid - but here, behind the break tender rills of water flow. Beckoning me, come to me. I cannot resist the call of your horn. I offer myself innocent – then without abandon. I am enveloped in your rolling embrace; a seduction of sound, commotion and might. Seaweed licks with a feathery tongue. Sea foam spume lathered thick hiss and bubble on my skin, bliss. Bladderwrack pods slip discreetly as I become one with your waves. Your mighty surges crash into me beating me senseless with sensation. Riptide threatens to take me away to drown in the wake of your crest, lungs filled with briny seed. Thrashing giving way to narcosis sinking into littledeath, your deep. |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
Fantastic piece, BBg. Perfect ending. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A petite morte slips its way into the open forum....very nice |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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BBGrrl Member
since 2007-07-17
Posts 181BC, Canada |
*grin* Bronze. So you liked it? wranx - thank you much for stopping by. The sea does have a way of sneaking up on you, n'est pas? Perhaps I should move this to another forum. JM - I appreciate you stopping by all of my posts. Thank you. |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~how lovely is that~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whew, this reminds me of Phantom of the Opera...so sensually alive with passion....and tastefully articulated well done |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The passion of the sea. Wonderful. |
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BBGrrl Member
since 2007-07-17
Posts 181BC, Canada |
Thank you much, Bel1e, LeeJ,ThisDiamond. The ocean has always been a source of inspiration to me. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Soft silica, sensual with remembered heat invites my cautious feet to your lips. Sly tongue lapping at my toes, gently laughing, bubbling as you draw away. Bathe me with your kisses, ohhh. wonderful descriptions,BBGrrl M |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
BBGrrl, this was just wonderful, enjoyed every line of it, seduction of the sea, the power of your words. Thanks for sharing. Rick |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You swept me away with you. It's beautiful writing, sensual images -- and a pleasure to read. Thank you Alison |
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BBGrrl Member
since 2007-07-17
Posts 181BC, Canada |
You are all very kind. It's a pleasure to share with such a complimentary and appreciative set of people. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
little seascape is huge when well worded, enjoyed it ms |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
I was swept away in the waves with you while reading this one. One wave after another hit me with every word as I sunk deep in this poetic pearl. Garfield |
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BBGrrl Member
since 2007-07-17
Posts 181BC, Canada |
Thank you daark, and thank you, garfield. |
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