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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
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0 posted 2008-01-22 03:35 AM


She shines like the Leo sun on crystal
She's the golden one,
all sparkle, energy and fun.
Her infectious laughter
lights up a dreary world.
Delightfully playful
and yet introspective.
She's her Grandma's birthday girl.
                          Ida Werrett

I wrote this poem for my grandaughter Crystal
who's birthday is August 12. (a Leo)

[This message has been edited by Marchmadness (01-22-2008 05:49 AM).]

© Copyright 2008 Ida Werrett - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-01-22 04:45 AM


She's her Grandma's birthday girl.

Ida.. and I bet she's the apple of your eye!  lovely words here... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-01-22 07:46 AM


Very lovely, dear Ida!

I have a young colleague being a leo and
she is like a daughter to me, a sunny whirlwind too.

love,
Margherita

aziza
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3 posted 2008-01-24 12:42 PM


And I smiled.

A

Kamelian
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4 posted 2008-01-24 01:50 AM


What a sweet idea... made me smile too
Honeybunch
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5 posted 2008-01-24 11:37 AM


Leo children do seem to have an extra sparkle about them that almost demands attention.  It's also something that they never seem to grow out of, fortunately.  My son's birthday is the 3rd August and so far he still sparkles.  

Enjoyed your words.

Helen

secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2008-01-24 11:39 AM


very pleasant and fine tribute to your 'birthday girl!'

applause!

simon
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7 posted 2008-01-24 11:49 AM


This is so nice...
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2008-01-24 12:03 PM


Enjoyed reading this...James
Earth Angel
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9 posted 2008-01-24 12:33 PM


Well, this Leo is into crystals and your Crystal sounds like a precious jewel! But then again, why wouldn't she be when her grandma is a real gem!

Love to both of you!

A precious write, Dear Ida!

Linda

passing shadows
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10 posted 2008-01-24 08:39 PM


big smile here

wonderful write!

Artic Wind
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11 posted 2008-01-31 07:04 PM


Wonderful write indeed!

ARCTIC WIND

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