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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-01-15 07:25 PM


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From a distance
An old dog’s mad barking—
Echoes off silent houses


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1 posted 2008-01-15 08:35 PM


I work outside, in the dark, throughout the city and I hear this nearly every night.  Cool write.  
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2 posted 2008-01-15 08:46 PM


My old dog was barking madly at nothing in the cold January night as I read this.  Eerie.  Joyce
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3 posted 2008-01-15 09:01 PM


VERY effective 'write'...well done!

long-sustained applause!!

Kamelian
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4 posted 2008-01-15 10:00 PM


Elegant & true - very nice.
Marchmadness
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5 posted 2008-01-16 01:30 AM


One of those nice, natural sounds that so many people like to complain about.
                                 Ida

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2008-01-16 03:38 AM


John, you are very very good at these ...really enjoyed thank you love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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