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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-01-12 09:09 AM



mosey town will always be glass and gravel
the metal sounds of hurry time
pressed soft sided down

there will be your eyes on mornings
bringing some new day dawn
and my mind will worship there

at the seam of the wisher's galloping
when there rides my mind
leatherless exposed to the wind

counting the spending of your words
golden mouthfuls with saliva
just a whisper now and then

to feed the starvation of my virginity
___________

daark

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Clang
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since 2005-12-15
Posts 222

1 posted 2008-01-12 09:16 AM


Interesting.  Most mornings I drink my coffee pondering life as a grasshopper.
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-01-12 09:18 AM


friend clang...enjoyed the comment, thank you
Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

3 posted 2008-01-12 09:25 AM


The want for more?  Or new?
Or both...enjoy the dream, and
have another cup of coffee, mister.

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-01-12 09:27 AM


ms kahlil...always more..can one ever get enough..coffee? thanks lady friend
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
5 posted 2008-01-12 12:24 PM


your morning coffee scene spices my evening chamomile tea atmosphere ...

Always a pleasure reading you, Poet!

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
6 posted 2008-01-13 05:12 PM


there will be your eyes on mornings
bringing some new day dawn
and my mind will worship there

I like these lines Mr Daark.... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Yvette
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since 2007-12-08
Posts 19
Texas, United States
7 posted 2008-01-13 05:56 PM


I have read you before.  Your metaphors are synaptic.

Thanks again.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
8 posted 2008-01-14 06:42 AM


ms mar, thanks to you for the sipping side smile.

_____________

ms r & b, thank you for looking into this piece ms.

________________

ms yvette, thank you for the texas eyes..you make me smile ms

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