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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-07-30 07:25 AM


The Absence of
Her Sweet Personality

When ask the parts
of her he misses,
her breasts finely shaped
like Hershey kisses.
Her fragrant smell
he missed as well.
Her silky skin
having no end.
But most of all
he missed her calls
and the absence
of her sweet
personality.

JamesLee
30July
2007





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MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02
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Dark side of the Moon.
1 posted 2007-07-30 01:16 PM



   Strong... as the mist of a ghost
     that lingers like a fragrant scent
       to tantelize the memory and
          make the heart yearn.

              MoonShadow
.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-07-31 09:22 AM


Thank you Moon Shadows...my sweetheart called me yesterday to tell me she misses me, and some other good stuff...James
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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3 posted 2007-07-31 10:51 AM


Sweet.

like Hershey kisses.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2007-07-31 04:46 PM


Thank you Susan for the nice response...
I was in a store the other day and they had this giant red hershey kiss and my thoughts turned to her...and later she called me and she hadn't called me in a long time...and in answer to prayer she was more honest with me in a matter of minutes than she had been with me for four years...James

gwaihir
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since 2007-07-20
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5 posted 2007-08-02 12:34 PM


Sweet but a little sad.    
Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
6 posted 2007-08-02 05:59 AM


You surely do miss here my friend and so well written, enjoyed James, thanks for sharing.

Rick

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2007-08-03 03:22 PM


Thank you gwaihir and Rick for the nice responses...James
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