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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-01-07 10:45 AM


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Beyond
Another year’s
Melting snow

The wail
Of a train


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© Copyright 2008 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2008-01-07 11:57 AM


simply excellent!!

[For me, it is always wonderful to see
  effective and fine Zen Minimalism
  on these blue pages!]

applause!

TomMark
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2 posted 2008-01-07 12:41 PM


A rigid finger is lacing spring
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Hooting away the cold?

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2008-01-08 01:21 AM


oh I do like the visuals here John... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

aziza
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4 posted 2008-01-13 04:23 PM


I felt this one in my chest.  

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