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caramac New Member
since 2007-07-29
Posts 2 |
To define beauty is a task impossible beauty isnt 1 thing it is a number of things the way the sun rises in the sky the way the children play and laugh the way people fall in love but is this real beauty? after all this is only the story were told as infants what if beauty was a different stage all together what if what is ugly is beauty? what if whats good is bad what if we are beauty? but are we? we war among our selves we battle out about religion we corrupt lives of familys we kill our world with pollutions what is the meaning of our awful acts? why do we seek power and have the need to wonder? why do we get up and walk the road to see what is on the other side? why is the wind blowing this way? why am i even here? am i a peasant of god? does he want me to do something? all these questions i need to know? why?...becasue i am only human. i need to wonder. im a new poet im only aged 15 and this is one of my 1st poems, i wrote this when i just sat down and started to wonder about things. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Nicely said.... Indeed, the sense of wonder is perhaps the thing that separates us from the rest the animal kingdom |
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caramac New Member
since 2007-07-29
Posts 2 |
thanks for your relpie friend. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Indeed much to ponder, well stated. welcome to Pips. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions. Age is but a passing, and I think it is something inherent in us to sit, and write, at such an age, as we start to understand all of the more that is around us. I started writing [to myself, seriously] at about your age, give or take a year or less. Nevermind that, it is good that you found yourself in a safe place, where your expressions can be all that you might like to share. Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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MegMeg Member
since 2007-05-14
Posts 85Virginia |
i really liked your poem, despite your use of the number 1, which usually annoys the begebies out of me but, your poem was intriguing, and thoughtful, and very nicely done, i hardly noticed the one. thanks your poem it was lovely. i am young poet myself, though i think you are far better than I. |
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