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wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2008-01-01 07:42 PM


No  Maggie, Nicholas chuckled
I decidedly would not like you to
Make that damnedable  red suit for me, unless
The notion of having me stomp around the house in it
Gives you more spark than you already have

If that be so, I guess you could sew some fur
To the cuffs of my old union suit
Though, I’m not aware of any ermine around here
I suppose I could trap you a couple of nutria
Otherwise, it’d be impractical

Where else could I wear such a get-up?
Unless I decide to get a job in the city
Standing on a corner with a bell and a bucket
Or at a department store, spending the day
Having children confess to me, their avarice

No Maggie, t‘was always best to mine a child’s
True wants from the dark cave of their dreams
So, I’ll go feed the dogs, maybe toss some hay
Over the fencerow, all the while thinking about
The long winter ahead, the warmth of our blankets

And the way your hips move beneath your nightdress

[This message has been edited by wranx (01-01-2008 08:13 PM).]

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Gaia
1 posted 2008-01-01 08:07 PM


"Au naturel" right to the ending, wranx.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2008-01-02 04:01 AM


oh I like your style poet one!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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3 posted 2008-01-04 03:30 PM


Nice...James
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4 posted 2008-01-05 01:12 AM


Love this all the way through.

A

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