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bipolarity of the trees |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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They become leaves again, no longer figures of doom that spin on their own stems of insanity clouds don't hang alabaster umbrellas on them and they are not swaying ballerinas that rehearse for the last dance of summer some weave their way into puddles that threaten to coat then incarcerate them in a semi-permanent fugue state as degrees start to dip past the 3- 2 spot but for now they are leaves again just waiting on the mood of viewer. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-30-2007 09:02 AM).] |
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Just another Pete Member
since 2007-12-06
Posts 74Scotland |
Oh I like this! So much to find in so few lines  |
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Irish Member
since 2006-05-02
Posts 50Ft Benning |
I wouldn't critique on a bet ! LOl yeah I think you are that good a reader from another Table  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Trees have their own unique spirit, just as a certain goddess I have come to admire. Lovely eyes see beyond the cloud umbrellas! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
An enjoyable twirl of words, Mish. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely!!!! ARCTIC WIND |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've captured the time of the mood of ice just right in this one... well done, little one!  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Great stuff, Mish! Really, great stuff |
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james.bowie Junior Member
since 2007-12-29
Posts 14bangor, Maine |
Nice, I do not like ice storms and this is what it brought back to me-and it is dark, that is how you feel when you have no power to heat your house. Thanks. A real man kisses his children goodnight |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inky...you make trees my favorite people..enjoyed this |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
marvelous vivid imagry...loved the entire premise of the poem....you certainly do see things quite deeply, and for that you should be applauded.... along with this write... loved the ending. Lee J. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks guys and dolls a happy new year to all |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I'm in the mood of viewing splendid green leaves dancing to a summer tune without checking the calendar ... Great stuff indeed! Love and Happy New Year, dear Michele. Margherita |
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