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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-12-26 07:16 AM

Timeless

The writing on the wall
holds all the memories of my touch,
placed there over the years
to display my love of life,
not knowing the hold
it would have on me.

So hard ...
to leave a place I call my own,
the comfort within myself,
having to let go,
beginning the walk alone
where inspiration is always a step ahead
and truth is just a sport,
waiting for the win.

Who can understand, not even I,
looking beyond tomorrow
wanting to be guided by those feelings,
to blend those thoughts into a mix
that will warm my winter
and take me to that "somewhere in time".

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2007-12-26 09:14 AM

Brilliantly written, M.
Nostalgia for the past and the future, juxtaposed in the present.
Remembering a movie visual, when billowy curtains connected two soul mates in that 'timeless' moment.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2007-12-26 09:53 AM

that will warm my winter
and take me to that "somewhere in time".

I'd love to knock at your door and have tea together feeling the warmth of now, where everything has its due place ... to make you love life and everyday's new opportunity.

Beautiful melancholic write with perspective.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2007-12-28 08:00 AM

M and M, thank you for the kind responses.
I am a Cancer ( a moonchild...which I like better) and have my many mood swings but a good life is not as easy to capture at the moment unless I accept choices that are not in my interest of heart.

M

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2007-12-29 05:38 PM

I particularly like the beginning of this ‘write!’:

“The writing on the wall
holds all the memories of my touch,
placed there over the years to display my love of life,
not knowing the hold
it would have on me.”

Also many other REALLY grand-fine lines here!...such as:

“where inspiration is always a step ahead
and truth is just a sport”;

Applause!!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2007-12-30 05:12 PM

Beautiful thoughts and I was not surprised that you are a moonchild. I have studied astrology most of my life and have learned that certain signs have very definite traits. My grandaughter is also a moonchild.
Emotional, moody and deep.
Ida

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2007-12-30 05:55 PM

Thank you Bruce

and Ida...well we moonchildren are very passionate and feeling (sometimes to a fault)

M

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