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StormyB
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0 posted 2007-07-28 12:02 PM



The buttery smell of hazelnut coffee
The warmth of the rising sun
The sound of your heart beating
In the embrace that makes us one
        Time stops
   If only for a moment.


© Copyright 2007 Michi Shenshu - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2007-07-28 03:45 PM


Sometimes a moment is all you need

M

hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2007-07-29 06:46 PM


this is so sweet.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

HopeS
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3 posted 2007-07-30 10:28 AM


Those special moments beautifully expressed

Hope

vandana
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4 posted 2007-07-30 12:48 PM


good read
MoonShadow
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5 posted 2007-07-30 01:09 PM



    That moment, between heartbeats,
     can be a memory that lasts an eternity.

         MoonShadow
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