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Open Poetry #41
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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
0 posted 2007-07-15 05:12 PM



And she shared
My lips.

Borrowed them,
To see the quick
Peace that would release
From the red hint of my
Softened grip.

She shared my feet,
My left waits,
As the right
Rained underneath her
Five handed Monet.

She tears
With each white sheet
That grazes the suns wake.

She tears on the sheets,
Their white paste
Switches traits,

They lye with a reflection,
Of a rose’s envy.
© Copyright 2007 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-07-15 05:26 PM

Beautiful truly

enjoyed
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-07-16 01:54 AM

Enjoyed...James
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2007-07-16 10:54 AM

Thank you for sharing this "Morning Beauty".

I especially enjoyed your closing lines.


EA
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
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4 posted 2007-07-17 01:40 PM




"And she shared
My lips."

this is a lovely poem
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