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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2007-07-27 09:50 AM



Should I Continue To Hope

I recollected so much
Had they remembered less
Maybe they are the one
Who continued to progress

Had they forgotten me
I am still in the same place
Was it easier for them
To vanish without any trace

What of their thoughts
Was I still in their memory
Had there been a clue
Perhaps I had failed to see

The words forever friend
I remember they often said
Yet I check obituaries
Wondering if they are dead

Saying frequent prayers
Had been helping me cope  
Will their be good news
Should I continue with hope

Hope ©2007

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-07-28 05:09 PM


Sometimes we have to create a new world...some friends are just casual friends no matter what they say...James
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2007-07-28 05:48 PM


I am not so sure there is  ever a "forever", Hope


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Winter Butterfly
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since 2007-02-03
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The hidden path beyond the ivy gate.
3 posted 2007-07-28 06:40 PM


There is always hope, without it what are we but pale shadows of nothingness.

True friends may be horrible at staying in touch but their heart thinks of you everyday.

~Winter~

"I used to worry what people thought of me, then I broke through my cacoon"

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
4 posted 2007-07-28 07:08 PM


HopeS, I know exactly what you are saying, I don't believe I have one good friend, if you can count one on your hand, you are a lucky person. I used to make such an effort to see people, do the right thing, make a friendship, the problem was when I did not go and see them, they would not visit me and I just got sick of it. Now I have my friends here on the blue pages and their company is great, so here if you want is a friend, hope with hope that someone calls you and things turn out right, enjoyed your words though say, have a great day.

Rick

Berenice
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since 2007-07-18
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5 posted 2007-07-29 01:50 AM


hope, allow hope to live.

good poem.

poeticdestiny
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since 2007-07-29
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Georgia
6 posted 2007-07-30 08:27 PM


Never give up hope.

In this fast paced world, its too easy to lose touch with the ones you care about...but that doesn't mean they care any less.

Wonderful poem.

MGROVES
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california
7 posted 2007-07-30 08:31 PM


keep the faith, I try

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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