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Confusion |
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kudanesh Member
since 2007-12-01
Posts 135Peterborough,England |
Confusion The blackness that allso brings light but all so comes dark and the room that it posseses Where and what it segests about you and what in with you stand can be taken as swift but seems slow The work it does and the lazynes of it all It trys to confuse but exsplains goes in cyercals but it is strate forward It so qiet but it screems out load it makes you blind but you can see you are happy but actuly sad to you it is good but also is bad you give up you but get you back you look one way but you walk the other you walking forward but you turn you back and all that you do will be in vain but not a wast of time Love might be just as confuseing but if you follow it through it all makes sence |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
Welcome to Pip. I will be very happy to read this piece again and comment, after you clean up the misspelled words and grammar. I think you have something good here and do not want to misjudge it on technical grounds. Type II poet. Its worth the work. [This message has been edited by Bronzeage (12-09-2007 08:54 PM).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Welcome to Pip ARCTIC WIND |
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