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Who? (Tarot Challenge)
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Who? (Tarot Challenge) |
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Just another Pete Member
since 2007-12-06
Posts 74Scotland |
It may not be wise but I'll stay, my love, whether for enoblement or pathological desire I cannot define. Past sacrifices brought me here consuming or consumed, willing and unwilling, they are a mystery, apparently I am a fool. With a turn of the sun I must die so the world can pass over renewed, that is my bargain, the promise I will not avoid. Just thought I'd have a go and say hi at the same time  (btw this is "The Hanged Man"). [This message has been edited by Just another Pete (12-06-2007 06:17 PM).] |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh my goodness. I like this one. That last stanza rocks. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Past sacrifices brought me here consuming or consumed, willing and unwilling, they are a mystery, apparently I am a fool. Welcome to Pip! And you did a fine job here! Love, Margherita |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful "go" as you put it...welcome to the blue pages... jwesley |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to the blue pages. You will like it here |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
grinning...I don't mind re-petes! And oh...my, I was gonna post the Hanged Man on Sunday as another challenge! And Pete, you do know that the Hanged Man is also thought to represent St. Peter...? Yeah, I'll bet you knew that.  Welcome to the forum, and thanks for choosing such an interesting debut! LOVED it!  |
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Just another Pete Member
since 2007-12-06
Posts 74Scotland |
Thanks everyone. Serenity - couldn't find the challenge, so just picked a card, will now go back and be temperate Pete |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Pete! I very much enjoyed your interpretation of the Hanged Man.  Very nice to meet you! Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, EA  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A nice flow of words...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Hello and welcome to our blue pages, I really enjoyed your first post with us RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Welcome to passions.....I like this poem alot I'll bet the hanged man knows about the martyrs sacrifices. The second stance is my favorite....brings up the question of what calls us to go and what begs us to stay....??? ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Aw! I like your interpretation, Pete! *smiles*....jo |
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chickoo007 Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 70India |
Good work there,looking forward to read more of your work!!! Great Going!!! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
J A Pete, Indeed, welcome to Passions. Enjoyed, Doc |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Something tells me that you'd make a fine poem out of the High Priestess too.. If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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