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Arius Miura de Galdri
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0 posted 2007-11-25 12:56 PM


"Time"

Time is like a river flowing
Always moving, never slowing
Taking joy in our not knowing
From whence it came and where it's going

For Time, a thousand years seem short
Cares not for jury, judge, or court
Because Time is the bitter sort
Who takes our youth and life for sport

But with it's knowledge, like a sage
Time gives us wisdom with our age
It calms our anger, lessens rage
And in the end destroys our cage

AMdG

"My candle burns at both ends; it will not last the night; but ah, my foes, and oh, my friends--it gives a lovely light!"  -Edna St. Vincent Millay

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Mysteria
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1 posted 2007-11-25 01:02 PM


Absolutely no truer words have ever been spoken.  I just wish my darn brain would catch up with the rest of me so we are in sinc.

          
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nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2007-11-25 02:18 PM


I agree~~  and enjoyed Mysteria's response

M

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-11-25 03:10 PM


Nice writing...James
Fairplay
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4 posted 2007-11-25 07:03 PM





This is just a collection of well know phrases or saying adjusted slightly and cobbled together.

I like to read more original stuff...off course I know this isn't copied as such just that it's all too familiar...

Eric

dgvarner
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5 posted 2007-11-30 02:11 AM


All very true...Time eases Life!

g


"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

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