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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-11-13 06:41 AM



when evening waters your sighs
and the ladytree of you begins her moan
between the lapping hands of winsome
and the urges of her vixen ocean

you sooth the gravel of me to sandscapes
and return the melting of my ice age
to the lover's stone in hinged longing
rudderless as a demon's writhing pines

we speak of a secret place in seams
with pocket talk awaiting our hands
so we can know each other's fingers
pressing just the right night's buttons

your mouth marks my neck in it's mind
for a place to place the willing song
my hands strum your sinew lengths
to bend your bow and arrow your lithe

when we are some tomorrow's harmony
__________

daark

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2007-11-13 07:47 AM


DarkDaddy when you write this way you just collapse me and leave me left all wrapped up in sighs...Your heart pen bleeds such wonderful ink.  
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2 posted 2007-11-13 09:00 AM


"you sooth the gravel of me to sandscapes"

yesssss....you do

Sunshine
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3 posted 2007-11-13 10:28 AM



Your heritage has sailed the horizons
yet again...

well done, m'friend...




Margherita
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4 posted 2007-11-13 05:23 PM


quote:
my hands strum your sinew lengths
to bend your bow and arrow your lithe

when we are some tomorrow's harmony



I love what I perceive through your words, always masterfully arranged, dear D.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2007-11-13 09:41 PM


ms gs, thanks lady friend

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ms suesea, you bless me babe, thank you


___________

ms sun, you always warm my echoes with your touch, thanks you

___________

ms mar, thank you for your special touch.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2007-11-14 12:25 PM


mmm...mmm.... Mr Daark... mmm... mmm...! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

aziza
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7 posted 2007-11-14 01:32 AM


Sensually wonderful.  You make my mind wander.

A

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2007-11-14 06:21 AM


ms R & B, I do like that mmmmm sound, thanks ms


____________


ms az, let your mind wander over here...I have a place for it to linger, thanks ms

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