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yvetters_24 Member
since 2006-08-27
Posts 52california |
I let my walls come down I let you enter my world I showed you the truth I showed you all the dreadful scars Painful memories that filled my past I trusted you to be the one who would always pick me up And for a time you were You were right there for me Through think in thin you helped me out But now you have new friends And now im just some dirt you have to clean off you shoe |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ohh...I could feel the pain in this. Very effective those last lines... |
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Hyaunt Member
since 2007-07-12
Posts 74 |
very emotional. |
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